Hello Lonewolf ,


Overall Impression:

Well, this looks delicious! I must ask, did you take the photo and did you make the pasta?

You made a comment that this image is for a story you wrote...I would recommend tagging the story here, as well. This way, when someone like me pops in and sees the image, there's a link that will take me right to the story!

As a side note, it's great to put such eye-grabbing images on our items because people are often attracted to images.

Have a great weekend!

Kindest Regards,




***Disclaimer***
The comments herein are just my humble opinions. Use whatever is useful; discard the rest. I'm not an editor, proof-reader, or any of the like. When I read and review, I am reading as a 'reader', to be entertained. You know your work better than anyone else! If I make a suggestion or a comment, it is meant in the spirit of 'helping' and I welcome the same when people review my work.