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 SEBASTIAN'S GROVE  [E]
An Ad for an Out-of-the-Ordinary Travel Spot with an Incredible Cuisine
by Joy
Review of SEBASTIAN'S GROVE  
Review by Beholden
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Totally delightful and intriguing. This is a bright and cheerful tale of invention and imagination beyond the common run. I was fascinated from beginning to end.

It was a great idea to have the teaser advert at the outset. The reader's curiosity is piqued and from the moment we find the place and start exploring, it is impossible to put the tale down. The writing is flawless and without detour, proceeding at a merry pace that is ideal for the subject and comedic intent.

Just one point troubles me. It is impossible to reach the place by road, apparently, and requires a helicopter to gain access. Which leaves me wondering where the roadkill so important to the local fast food joint comes in. An odd trading system supported by helicopter transport, perhaps? It seems unlikely. I know it's churlish of me to raise so practical an objection to such a wonderful expedition into the imagination, but I suspect that I might not be the only one to notice. It would take a very minor edit to correct (or explain), after all.

Even so, I enjoyed the story immensely. Bravo!

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