Hi Devin,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is intense and passionate. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. In the poem, a couple who only have each other share a night of passion and love. I loved the powerful emotions that run through the poem as I read. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.