LuniSolar,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is light and slightly humorous. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about the embarrasment of being caught in a mess. We have all had embarrasing moments that we would rather forget. We just have to roll with it. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothng to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.