Hi, Josh Pilon , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am review "When I was young"  because I discovered it in the prompt for "Space Blog" .

First Thoughts: The rhythm of this free verse poem flows easily from line to lime. The first person point of view was a good choice, because it gives the impression that the speaker is talking directly to the reader.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way When I is repeated throughout the poem, because it gives the poem unity.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the subject.




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .