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 Drops of Rain  [E]
Falling in and out of love is like the coming and going of a storm.
by Trisha
Review of Drops of Rain  
Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.


My impression of this item was: This is a metaphorical poem about love. It tells the story of somebody who cannot find true love. The rain is love and the storm is the downpour of emotions the poet attaches to love. Does the poet ever find true love?

Your spelling and grammar: "Casades" should be cascades. A typo I believe.

What I liked most: I loved the use of metaphor. It was very imaginative and clean.

What I liked least: Nothing

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