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A Sense of Belonging  [E]
A homecoming... (Free Verse)
by 🌕 HuntersMoon
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi, 🌕 HuntersMoon , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am review "A Sense of Belonging because I discovered it in the prompt for "Space Blog.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The second stanza establishes the poem's speaker. The rhythm is neither smooth nor rough and moves the narrative forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it emphasizes the sense of belonging to the planet.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem because it gave me a sense of home.

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