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 Cancer Has Many Forms  [E]
Love is a collection plate of living. Never repaid
by Datakon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Star**BalloonB*Welcome to WDC! I am here with a review to celebrate you! *Delight*


Wow! I liked the idea of many forms of cancer from the title. Awesomely symbolic!

Your free verse is very evocative and I could feel the vibe. The image of "mind red" and the personified "Cancer eats" are so effective. The laugh line is evocative too. Well done.

The repeated words were purposeful and I enjoyed the short lines and flow. The lone word in the middle creates a space and had me pause to consider. *Thumbsupgreen* I am not sure why "Of me" is capitalized. *Confused*

Thanks for sharing your expression and craft. I hope you enjoy WDC as you Write on! *Star*

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