First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
My favorite part: The first stanza is my favorite, because it hooked me.
Final Thought: I enjoy ed reading this poem because it gave me something to think about in both business and life.
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