Hi, TheBusmanPoet , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am review "No Control"  because I discovered it in the prompt for "Space Blog" .

First Thoughts: The poem looks good on the page and follows the free verse form. The rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while giving the reader something to think about concerning control

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The first line is my favorite, because it hooked me and drew me into the poem.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this well-written and thought provoking poem because it gave me something to think about concerning worry.




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .