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Who Rules the Roost?  [ASR]
a brief look at how humans and birds interact on the coast at docks and ports of call
by Sherasi
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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The first line can read at least two different ways maybe more if I think about it a while.
My first reaction was "salt cries and birds cry, interesting thought. Then slat air and the crying birds. I wonder if birds actually cry. Salt air who saluted the air or what? probably the sea salted the air. The birds could be calling or making noises which can be a cry.

Who or what attacked the ice cream cone. Was the ice cream inside shuddering? Did the cone get broken during the attack? What kind of cone was it? Why was it attacked?

Getting revenge with antacid could mean having lactose intolerance, maybe. Or it could have been something in the meal eaten before the desert of an ice cream cone. Or, it could be that there is too much stomach acid regularly and taking antacids is a way of life. Or, the being having these events happening could be an alien who has no business trying to ingest things us humans are able to enjoy.

These are the thoughts that played in my mind after reading your word art.

Thank you for sharing your word art with me and WDC members.

Safe travels and many blessings.

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