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Review #4635838
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 Ritual of Life  [E]
A 7 year old attempt at penning the thoughts unleashed behind glassy eyes.
by outsidetheaxle
Review of Ritual of Life  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Reading your poem was thought-provoking.

I COULD FOLLOW THE IDEAS AND ACTIONS ABOUT LIFE TODAY AND TOMORROW

The smile today was spiritually uplifting while the idea of tomorrow it won't last saddened me.

I hope every day you will find at least one reason to smile. for me, a great reason to smile is "just because", and also I can and also because I have the breath of life.

Thank you for sharing your word art with me and WDC members. Write with might for readers' delight.
Safe travels and many blessings.

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