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Review #4644678
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by ruwth
         Review for entry/chapter: "~ Lord-Willing ~" 
Review by Cubby
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Greetings, ruwth! I am reviewing this because I am part of "I Write: Enter the Second Decade" . *Smile*

*Quill* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.


What I Liked

         *Bullet* I like your way of thinking, Ruwth. It takes pressure off from us when we say "Lord willing" and "I intend to..." I'm going to remember this! I've been traveling a lot this past week and have fallen behind on a few things. Although my commitments have a little flexibility, I may have felt less stressed if I'd added Lord willing, my intentions are to... *Wink*

         *Bullet* I do remember people saying, Lord willing and the creek don't rise. Not sure if it was in a movie, a song, or at church, but I do remember it. I have no doubt I'll be repeating it now that you brought it back to my attention. *Laugh* We have a creek on our property line and sometimes it rises, flows into our pond, and floods the road! When this happens, we can't drive out because we live on a dead end road. Actually, we've used a tractor and a kayak back when we were working. There's also a bike trail that crosses the dead-end part of the dirt road, so we can get out that way, either walking or on bikes.


Suggestions to Consider

         *Bullet* I have no suggestions.


Final Thoughts

         I really enjoyed this little piece! I love how you ended it...I like doing this and I intend to do it more... *Wink* If the creek don't rise, right? *Bigsmile*


Have a great day and...*Quill*
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !
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