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Redundant Circle  [13+]
A Poem for Shadows and Light
by ♥Hooves♥
Review of Redundant Circle  
Review by Cubby
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
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Greetings, ! I am reviewing this because I am part of "I Write: Enter the Second Decade. *Smile*

*Quill* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

What I Liked

         *Bullet* I could definitely relate to waking up early to thoughts and anxieties! Also, knowing and not knowing. It's so hard to focus during times like this.

         *Bullet* I've also learned over the years, as you so nicely state...

The story has been told before,
we all have our battles to fight


         *Bullet* And you are so right when you say Love hugs if we let it in unexpected places.

Suggestions to Consider


         *Bullet* I have no suggestions.

Final Thoughts

         I'm sure many will be able to relate to this. I know I did. I never thought about it being a Redundant Circle but you are correct! We are redundant and so is life. I believe we've all got more in common than we think, and we especially realize this as we begin our journey into getting older. *Heart* NOT that either one of us is at that point yet! *Whistle*


Have a great day and...*Quill*
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !
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