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Hello elephantsealer ,

I am reviewing this story/poem for the following contest:
"Rising to the Challenge! - CLOSED"   by Lilith of House Martell

Prompt: Start your poem with this phrase: "It begins..."
Line Count: minimum 12 lines

This review has no bearing on the outcome of the contest. Reviewing the entries gives me the opportunity to take a closer look.

Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:

You wrote an emotional poem, for sure. These words resonated with me because I was feeling very blue yesterday.

This poem made me think about how life, in general, is cyclical. We have hardship (rains and storms), we grieve, and then we eventually move on. After a while, the rains return.

You made good use of the prompt! Well done.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:

No errors were noted.

Closing Comments:

Thank you for your entry. Keep writing.



Thank you for sharing your work.


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .