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 Two brothers (Working Title)  [13+]
Billy has extraordinary powers but wants nothing to do with a super life anymore
by jonoprecel
Review by Spring in my Sox
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Coolness. The way you slip the special abilities in there is almost sneaky it almost made me think my imagination was getting away from me but then bang waterkinesis and invisibility. Awesome! Great way of establishing a character too. I mean at first it seems like he's just an ordinary barrister then wow!
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