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 | Unearthly Music  [E] She can change your emotions with her voice  |
| (4.0)   Welcome to WDC Dominique Ford! I am here with a review to celebrate you!  The title drew me in with its evocative image.  The vision your words create is so vivid and I had to read to the end. The idea of not being able to even describe the sound is awesome and leaves us to imagine our own rendition of what it might be like! The concept of it being sadness itself is fascinating too. Like a personification of the feeling.   The reaction of the listener is clear and I could easily imagine the scene. I enjoyed the word choice where you use repeated letters and some alliteration. The idea that the feelings that you list "wrap" around him. It gives them a power. Good use of personifying. The ending is abrupt and one can feel the relief of the listener. And I am left to ponder if he has just let go of emotional baggage or... is it a kind of death. Cool! the idea of healing with sound is so right on!! I wanted to know what happens next.   I enjoyed reading and was not thrown out by any major glitch. Mixing long with short sentences adds variety to the flow. The use of the present tense is effective too. Formmating on the page might be tweaked.  Thanks for sharing this moving tale. It grabs attention! Keep on Writing! eyestar  
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You responded to this review 03/13/2022 @ 9:19pm EDT