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 |  | Erin the Fair  [E] Limerick for a pretty lass  |
| (5.0)  Greetings, buddhangela's Wounded Not Dead, I am reviewing this today as one of two judges for the "Writing 4 Kids Contest " . Please do not edit your limerick until after the winners are announced! Thank you!   First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest. Visually appealing Nice! Easy to understand Yes First Impression Great limerick! Loved the appearance of it, too—the color, the font, the bold text. And your cover!  Meter: Perfection. Awesome! Rhyme: Excellent. Flow: Bouncy and fun. Technicalities: Don't forget to include your line count (or word count for stories) next time.  Other than that, I found no typos at all! And your prompt note was so well organized!  Favorites:Leaving her fam'ly dispairin'. Love this!   Final thoughts: You've managed to tell a story in a five-line limerick! You've done a great job.Best of luck in the contest! Have a great day and...  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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