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 Abandoned   [E]
A lover leaves without a goodbye.
by Sumojo
Review of Abandoned  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I'm reviewing this for "CLOSED: Merit Badges for Fun Raffle "  because your post was just before mine. I'm not a professional reviewer and these are only my opinions. Take what you find useful. Ignore the rest. All comments are given with love and respect for you and your writing. *Smile*

*CheckB* My overall impression and emotional impact: The poem looks good on the page. The color font and the first person voice emphasizes the emotions of lose and loneliness.


*CheckO* Form, format, rhyme and meter: The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other.

*CheckY* Grammar, spelling and mechanics: I found no problems with grammar, spelling, or mechanics.


*CheckR* Suggestions for improvement: The form does not precisely follow the villanelle form, which is sometimes difficult to get to flow smoothly.


*CheckG* My favorite parts: The last stanza is my favorite because it expresses healing.


Thank you so much for sharing your writing! It was a pleasure to review and I hope you find my comments helpful. Remember, they are only my opinion. You're the writer and know what's best for you. *Wink*

Good luck with the rest of "CLOSED: Merit Badges for Fun Raffle " ! *Shamrock* You got this! You can do it! I believe in you! *Hug*


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   *CheckG* You responded to this review 05/25/2022 @ 3:25am EDT
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