Good afternoon! I thought I would come by for a little bit and I found your poem "Offspring"

My first impression: WOW!

As I came on in I have to have it had me right from the start! As you certainly do have a way with words as you really do paint a very clear picture for me to see and I like how this poem really makes me feel I would have to say that this part is what really stood out the most: the woman veiled in black. How she resembles me, floating beneath the weight of water. But I really do love the full poem in full as it perfectly fits together! Keep sharing and keep writing! A five-star rating for sure!




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