Hello Kåre Enga in Udon Thani !

I saw your poem in the news feed and liked it. I also saw Jim's plea for more anniversary reviews.

Then I noticed that your anniversary month was this very month so I decided you'd be the first to receive an anniversary review from me this month. Happy WDC Anniversary month!


INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
You wrote a beautiful nature and memory poem that I enjoyed reading.

You kept me riveted throughout and made me read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

This was a highly visual and emotional poem and I loved the personal nature of it.

Your poem was beautifully written, evoked strong emotions in me, and was interesting to read.

Your poem is well written, flows nicely and, I think, is highly relatable to anyone who enjoys nature or memories.

This poem might be a good fit with the "Shadows and Light" contest that Choconut ~ House Targaryen runs. I don't remember all the rules so you might want to double check but it struck me as an appropriate poem for that contest.

My favorite line is this one: "Now I drink your sunshine every morning in Portugal," ... it struck me as particularly beautiful and poignant.

I liked how you structured your poem.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your poem.

The picture you chose and genres you selected are perfect for the folder / blog in which your poem is located.


CONCLUSION:
You wrote a beautiful, emotional poem that I enjoyed reading. Well done!

Thank you for sharing your poetry with the writing.com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler


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