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 forever falling  [ASR]
I feel like I'm falling, the end is nigh, so I decided to write this while I cry.
by vapid
Review of forever falling  
Review by Sunny
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Good afternoon! I thought I would come by for a little while and visit with you and as I came on in I found this that you call "Forever Falling" I was into this dark emotional heartfelt part that really had me feeling some kind of way while emotions soared as you really do have a way with words as you weave your web of words so cleverly and most creatively as you leave me wanting more and more! There must be more to this poem and I can clearly see it as you do paint this very clear picture for me to see. Keep sharing and most of all keep writing. A five-star for sure!

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