Good afternoon! I thought I would come on in for just a short little visit and as I did I stumbled into your piece that you call "Shifting Memories".

As I came on in I am wrapped up in the story that you are telling all so well as you spin your weaved words so intentionally and with your unique and cleverly style you reel me in as a picture invokes in my head to which you have painted so very clear as you creativity soars! While I even have scents roaming around up in my head. I enjoyed your nice piece. Though I think I saw a small error which I shall share with you indeed. In the first line, I am writing it out now. The clock says 9:53 and Dizzy’s playing through tinny speakers. the word tinny I think might be tiny However it does not take from your story one little bit. Keep sharing and most of all keep writing!





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