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 A first thing to write about  [E]
A couple words, not much in thought
by Megalodon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Welcome to WdC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon"  and "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 

This one showed up on random reads, and am I glad it did! As someone who has been on here fifteen years and counting, I had to smile at the memories your poem brought forth.

I love the format, I love the tone, I love the all capitals for 'FOUND THIS' and my favourite phrase is 'Word Woods'. Superb!

Yes, buttons and buttons and buttons - and believe me, you'll get to each of them faster than you thought you would and you'll be addicted before you can say 'I'm writing!' 'Seems fun' you say? It is fun, and friendship, and family and support and a whole lot more. You'll soon overcome the feeling of being lost and think of this as your online home.

Suggestions:
1. Pick a couple more genres (Community, Writing, maybe) to give your work more exposure on site.
2. If you'd like to explore the use of writing ML - centre, font, size, italics, manye colour ...
3. I'd like a little explanatory note, if you would like to put one in after the poem, about how exactly you DID find WdC.
(For example, I was searching the internet for 'poetry contest' and stumbled across the site in April 2007.)

I hope you do stay, I'd like to read more of your writing!
Write On!
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