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This one showed up on Read and Review, and I'm glad it did!

HILARIOUS! *Rolling*

But - wait - this guy is such a quick thinker and can't get a job any place? Surely skills like that are invaluable? *Ha*

The title and brief description intrigued me, and then the genres really made me curious.

You built the story up well. I was hooked from the beginning to the end, and I could feel the emotions and picture what was happening. The ending came as a pleasant *Laugh*!

I have no suggestions for improvement, this one works as it is.

Write On!
Dragon Sig created by Kiya gifted by Secret Squirrel! Thank you!

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