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 message in a bottle  [13+]
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by Rhyssa
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I absolutely L*Suitheart*VE this poem!

The title and brief description intrigued me.
I'd suggest adding a couple more genres, to give the poem more exposure on site.

The layout, with its lack of capital letters, the verse structure and words chosen work perfectly to create the mood. The poem is symbolic of the things that unite us, and the things that create uniqueness.

I had to smile when the 'garlic' came on! It is just funny enough to provide a comic touch without being jarring.

When you say 'what rhythm does your feet' - don't you mean 'what rhythm do your feet' ...?

Thanks for sharing this one!
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