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Independent  [E]
Independence
by jaya
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hallo jaya
This poem showed up on Read and Review. The title grabbed me, as I think all of us aspire to be more independent at some level and are curious about what others have to say on this. I'm wondering if you'd like to add to the brief description, and if you'd like to pick more genres.

The poem works very well. In just 13 lines, you've provided food for thought about the definition of true independence. You give a beautiful definition of your own, which has a lot of depth and a lot of meaning in today's society. I like the layout, the verse structure and the words chosen.

I have no suggestions for the poem!
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