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This one showed up on random reads. The title intrigued me immediately. I'm reviewing as I go along.
I liked the first section a lot, the rhythm and the repetitions had me keeping time in my head. I could relate to the patterns! *Smile*

The description of the LRL patterns reminded me of learning to type on a manual typewriter when I was in Grade 9. 'asdf ;lkj' we had to type over and over again and get it perfect. I smiled as I recalled this.

Due to my weak eyesight, I usually click out of the longer pieces that show up, but this one had me intrigued and I read more than I have at one go. I must admit I 'blipped' over some of the technical details, but that isn't a reflection on your writing.

Thanks for sharing this one!

Drum on,
Beat the Rhythm!
--- and this group will keep the rhythm with you! *Wink*

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