Nice Story! It really captured the intensity of a hostage situation. It doesn't seem like a second was wasted as this story immediately starts the reader off in the middle of the middle of the action with one of the hostages injured and lead needing to think on her feet. The description in this story was really good as I could picture all the scenes from the makeshift first add to the negotiation. I love the fast paced finish with the police breaking in to end the situation. It covered all the moment that a person would expect to see in a hostage situation Also creative use of the prompts fitting the selected words into the story.

This item was reviewed for "Ultimate Trinket Adventure [Mainland]" 

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