This poem makes the reader reflect on the people that they see around them. I feel like it has a good message to it reminding people not to automatically visualize bad things in others. It seems to reflect the idea that you should treat others how you would like to be treated. This is the ideal world that people would be happier living it.

Structurally this poem has some strong elements to it. I like the alliterations "Chalky Chatty Coffee", "Oily Ogly" and "Powdered Prostitute" all add some pop to to the lines they were in. Good writing!

This was reviewed as part of: "Ultimate Trinket Adventure [Mainland]" 

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