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 The Return  [E]
Week 4 of the MIcro Fiction Challenge
by Spring in my Sox
Review of The Return  
Review by KingsSideCastle
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Very creative interpretation of the prompt. This story had dark comedic feel to it. A voodoo priestess is definitely not someone that readers would expect to see getting asked to accept a return. I have to admit I'm left wondering what the lead character was hoping for purchasing the curse in the first place. I'm wondering what the initial interaction was though it is clear there was a poor choice of words involved.

Anyway this is a great creative, clear and concise story that is told in the limited amount of words that Micro fiction allows. Nice writing!

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