I really, really enjoyed your story because of the presentation of the different dialect. This dielect was easy for me to read and understandeth. I've written tryin' to figer the proppeer wase to do dialects differen'ly. Let me know what you thin. The story is believable, characters too, and the speech worked very well. Actually, I focused more on the speech patterns.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WDC members.




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