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 Tackle  [18+]
WARNING!! Same sex sexual themes
by GingerHorse
Review of Tackle  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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This is definitely a strange story. You have quite the imagination. I feel like you left this story hanging over a cliff with no resolution. It leaves me wondering about why this bizarre happened and why or how this makes a difference in the positive because headless bodies were never explained. How for example are headless bodies going to help the team win games? What caused this phenomenon? And, does the team ever win, and the teammates who are failing ever pass their courses?

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WDC members.

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