Hi, eyestar~* , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Invalid Item"  because I discovered it on the "I Write: Enter the Second Decade"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, speaker, theme, and plot of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative, emotions, and plot forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: This is my favorite line, Note: The fortune you seek is in another cookie! I like this lime because I could imagine the disappointment the speaker flet.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the unique way it showed the emotion of disappointment.








My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .