Hi, AmyJo- only 2 steps behind - , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "Don't fight with Momma"  because I discovered it on the "I Write: Enter the Second Decade"  forum page.

First Thoughts: The first stanza established to form, mood, theme, and plot of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming word compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the plot forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The last line is my favorite, because it climaxed the poem with a lesson.

Final Thought: I am giving this well-written children's poem a 5.0, because children will enjoy reading and listening to it.








My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .