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by A Guest Visitor
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Why did the kidnapper turn Charlie into a water balloon? Who is this kidnapper? what did Charlie do or not do to deserve being kidnapped and flooded with water?

How did the kidnapper feel about Charley? Why did the kidnapper want to turn Charlie into a water balloon rather than do something else? What emotions was the kidnapper feeling while watching Charlie blow up with water? How did Charlie feel about drowning or becoming so bloated? Was Charlie afraid--trying to scream, trying to cry, what was happening inside? Was the kidnapper happy or revengeful toward Charlie, or something else?

Did the kidnapper fear getting caught?

Did Charlie think about death?

Your story is strange but interesting because of the water balloon idea.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WDC members.

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