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 She  [E]
For my wife
by Turtle ~ KanyáthƐko:wa:h
Review of She  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Thank you for having a WDC anniversary this month, so that I got to read this absolute masterpiece. The title and brief description intrigued me at once. I suggest you pick an item type and genres, to give the poem more exposure on site.

How wonderfully you tell the story. The verse structure and words chosen create a soothing mood, a feel-good sensation. The message is crystal clear - to look beyond what is visible to the deeper reality, and to reap rich rewards. I appreciate also that you bring in that it's not all hunky-dory always, but true loves pulls through the tense times as well.

My only suggestion would be for WritingML - font, size, line-spacing and centering.

Thank you for sharing with us a tiny bit of what you share with each other. You are blessed and I feel enriched to have read this.

Write On!
- Sonali

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