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 Inspired  [13+]
just a poem
by Modest
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I visited your portfolio since it's your WDC Anniversary today. Happy 18th!

The title is apt. I must say, though the brief description doesn't give much, it intrigued me enough to read the poem. The genres work, too.

The poem is one of the most unique love poems I've come across. Many love poems tend to describe the physical features of the loved one, and the emotional characteristics that are attractive. This poem turns it around and describes the effect of these on the beholder. I read it through three times to fully appreciate it.

My only suggestion would be for some WritingML, like font, size, linespace and centering.

Write On!
- Sonali

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