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 Christmas Poem  [13+]
A poem inspired by the arrival of a couple of cards and a Christmas letter.
by Beth350
Review of Christmas Poem  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hallo!
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The brief description and genres work.

WOW - I could relate to every word!
You've summed up the feeling so effectively - people who were once close, who attempt to stay close with the annual print out! I also appreciate the pathos of the ending. Great job! *Thumbsupl*

Suggestions:
1. The title - the title, while it fits, is a bit general. Maybe you'd like to tweak it to give a hint of what is to come.
2. WritingML - I'd suggest Writing ML like font, size, colour, line space and centering.

Thanks for sharing this poem
Write On
Merry Christmas to all, and to all, a good write!

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