Hi, Maddie Sunshine Stone , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Invalid Item"  because it was ahead of my entry in "Twenty-three in Eleven " .

First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Labradors loving the weather. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

What I Like: I like the interaction between the mother and daughter because it showed how people and animals can help with grief.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

}Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction between the mother and daughter.

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