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The Apple Assassin  [ASR]
better watch them apples!
by AmyJo- only 2 steps behind -
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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*AppleG* What a delightful poem! *Apple*

I could picture this fella devouring apples. The title, brief description, genres, layout, rhyme scheme and verse structure work well to tell the tale. I was smiling throughout.

Suggestion:
I would like to know how he gets the apples he eats.
Does he climb trees? Buy them? People give him? Or does he even *Shock2* steal a few? I think it would add to the poem if we could see the acquisition and consumption!

Thanks for sharing this!
- I love these owls

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