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Review of Soft Wind  
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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It is a beautiful Japanese Haiku. It fulfils all the characteristics of a traditional Japanese Haiku except one. In the second line, you use six syllables instead of seven syllables. So, one syllable is short.
In our modern days, it does not matter much. The main thing is whether poetry should create an image of mother nature. The poet can create that image successfully.
We are always running restlessly to fulfilling our targets. It is a too hard journey. Sometimes, we become tired. Our physical conditions demand rest for a while. If we surrender ourselves to mother nature, we are restored very fast and begin the journey again in a fresh mood. The poet draws this particular image with perfection.
Thanks for your marvellous creation.
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