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Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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We, all material people, want happiness. If we observe with care, we must identify that satisfaction is not genuine. It is entirely artificial. That rhyming poem is delivering us the differences between Artificial and actual happiness. We can not differentiate between these two. So, the problem begins.
It is a brilliant poem. Write on!

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