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 Jail Bird  [13+]
A poem written by me when my abuser was finally sentenced and put away.
by YourHonestFriend
Review of Jail Bird  
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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This poetry contains a few too-big lines. But most interestingly, if you start reading once, you can not leave it before the completion of the entire poetry.
It is mainly auto-biographical based poetry in which the narrator describes the tragic end of a relationship. They very much love each other. But, Trust was lesser. They have heavily for that for the guilty.
A person loved another, but he did not believe her. He wished to cage her with a lot of treasures. Self-independence is such a thing that cannot be compared to any gem. That man could not understand the simple fact.
Our life is like a merry-go-round. So, the situation may reverse at any moment. In the story, it happens the same.
Now, she takes command over him as he dominates her life and sometimes before. She asks that man whether he likes the situation or not.
A great lesson is given here in the piece. It is nothing but does not misuse your power. Time is indeed too brutal. When you are not in command and will suffer due to opposite reactions. We should be conscious of this fact unless we will pay heavily for our deeds.
It is an excellent beginning. Go ahead. Keep writing.

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