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 Lindsey Bell  [E]
A fictional poem about an intercollegiate softball star and honor student.
by Tim Chiu
Review of Lindsey Bell  
Review by Monty
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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This young lady had a goal and handled it well. I enjoyed this read and so have to join in. I mean I am watching her as she is practising and then to run the bases. I guess you might say you put me in the audiance with the picture you painted so the imagery is good. The rhythm, and rhyme is also fine. Thank you for sharing.
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