Hi Tim, I am reviewing your poem Your Beautiful Soul. Just showing you your poem through my eyes.

Title and appearance on the page: The title to the random reader is generic and cliche. Although, if written specifically for an individual, not to be read by others, it is lovely. What drew me to read was the brevity. I can quickly read and review.

Form: Written in 2 strophes, total 15 unrhymed lines with variable lengths. The first strophe describes the subject and the second describes the narrator's belief and hopes in the relationship. A love poem.

Texture, sonics, word choice: The poem reads fluidly like prose. To the casual reader, the imagery is abstract. I believe the narrator is in love. The words however to not cause me to fall in love.

What I liked: I was impressed by the passion of the narrator.

Suggestions: Please accept that this is just one person's opinion, I felt this poem needed more concrete images to communicate the emotion. sumptuous, gorgeous, soulful intellect, what do these words look like?

Conclusion: I think this is a personal poem meant for a specific person. To be read by random readers, it needs to be rethought.

I actually enjoyed the ease of this read.

~~Tink

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .