Hi Samm, I just happened on another of your poems up for review. I'm looking forward to reading your

Invalid Item  This item number is not valid. #2289791 by Not Available.

.

Title and appearance on the page. Having recently reviewed another of your poems, I knew by seeing your name I was going to like your poem. Then to see the title, font and neat quatrains on the page I couldn't wait to read it.

Form Written in 6 short-lined, variant rhymed, quatrains.

Texture, rhythm, word choice, sonics: Englishanese? It's a hard word to say. The humor. the parallel of haiku and sushi, the contribution of the font to the visual, all add up to a delightful poem.

Suggestions I just enjoyed this too much to pick it apart. I do have one suggestion, dig a little deeper into haiku. It is so much more than your portrayal. All though I'm pretty sure you already know that.

birth and death
of a moment
haiku
                   ~jvg

What I liked The humor. I just had fun reading this.

~~Tink

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .