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Review #4691344
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These Are My JOTtings, Part #2  [E]
We live much of life amid unique choices. Joy is anchored in The One beyond our life.
by Jay O'Toole
         Review for entry/chapter: "Shakespearean Sonnet: "Life is Worth Our Time"" 
Review by Tinker
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Jay, Such a pleasure to read
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These Are My JOTtings, Part #2  (E)
We live much of life amid unique choices. Joy is anchored in The One beyond our life.
#2172808 by Jay O'Toole


You nailed the meter and the rhyme and most importantly your sonnet "sings". I loved reading this Shakespearean sonnet. The form obviously suits you and the joyfull content is accentuated in the declamatory ending couplet.

Congratulations.

~~Tink

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