Hi Kaylen, I'm here to review your

Again  (E) A poem about constant disappointment. #2292494 by Kaylen

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Title and appearance on the page. A simple "Again" title may make some curious to read, but the brevity of the piece will certainly attract if the title didn't. Most poets can't resist a very short poem.

Form A septastich, a poem in 7 lines, using the poetic device repetition at the beginning of each line with using variant rhyme. Rhyme xxaabxb x being unrhymed. No apparent metric or syllabic pattern.

Texture, word choice, rhythm, and sonics Read aloud it sounds like a chant.

Suggestions If this were mine, I'd leave out the word "like" in L4, it unnecessary and weakens the line.

What I liked: You say a lot in a very short poem. That is power.

Thanks for the enjoyable read.

~~Tink

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