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Review #4691451
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 Thirst  [13+]
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by Aelyah
Review of Thirst  
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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The story is indeed very much enjoyable. It starts with the word one and continues all through the story. Though the pace of the middle is lightly low-paced, it balances again in the later stage of the story. Regaining the lost speed is undoubtedly challenging artwork, but the execution is perfect. That helps to gain readability, too.
Nice work.
Please, continue the performance.
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